We have been learning to write letters to communicate with people.
Today we wrote thank you letters to the astronomers for coming out to our school last week with their amazing telescopes.
Take a read of some of our brilliant letters below, do you think they meet our success criteria?
21 George Street,
WAIUKU
25 May 2010
Dear Chris, John and Arthur,
Thank you for coming to Waiuku Primary School with the telescopes so we can see the moon and Saturn. I enjoyed seeing Saturn.
From Jack D.
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21 George Street,
WAIUKU
25 May 2010
Dear Chris, John and Arthur,
Thank you for taking the telescopes to our school. I have learned a lot about the planets because you let us see through the telescopes.
From Tauryn
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21 George Street,
WAIUKU
25 May 2010
Dear Chris, John and Arthur,
Thank you for coming to Waiuku Primary School. I really liked it. It was amazing because Saturn was very small. The telescopes were very amazing too. Please come next year!
From Emily
2 comments:
Great to see you are learning to write letters and at the same time learning to type!
it was cool
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